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12 Common In-Text Citation Errors in APA and MLA (and Fixes)

The in-text citation mistakes instructors mark most often in APA and MLA papers, with corrected examples for each one and a quick checklist before you submit.

By ZeroTell Editorial Team6 min read

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  1. Why small citation errors matter
  2. The quick reference: APA vs. MLA basics
  3. 1. The citation doesn't match the reference list
  4. 2. Missing page number on a direct quotation
  5. 3. Commas in MLA citations
  6. 4. Using "p." in MLA or leaving it out in APA
  7. 5. Ampersand vs. "and"
  8. 6. Listing every author when you should use et al.
  9. 7. Including first names or initials
  10. 8. Putting the period in the wrong place
  11. 9. Citing the year in MLA or skipping it in APA
  12. 10. Handling sources with no author or no date badly
  13. 11. Citing the original when you only read the secondary source
  14. 12. Over-citing the same source in one paragraph
  15. A five-minute checklist before you submit
  16. Key takeaways

The most common in-text citation errors are mismatches with the reference list, missing page numbers for quotations, wrong punctuation (especially commas in MLA), and incorrect handling of multiple authors. Each one is easy to fix once you know the pattern your style guide expects. Below are twelve mistakes we see constantly in student papers, with a corrected version of each.

All examples use fictional sources, so you can focus on the format rather than the content.

Why small citation errors matter

An in-text citation does one job: it points the reader to an exact entry in your reference list or works-cited page. When the pointer is broken, the reader can't verify your claim, and an instructor may wonder whether you understood where the idea came from.

Most errors are not dishonest. They come from mixing APA and MLA habits, copying a format from an old paper, or fixing the reference list at the last minute without updating the text. Still, they cost marks, and a pattern of missing citations can look like plagiarism even when it isn't.

The quick reference: APA vs. MLA basics

ElementAPA 7th editionMLA 9th edition
Basic parenthetical(Hollis, 2021)(Hollis)
With a page(Hollis, 2021, p. 42)(Hollis 42)
Two authors(Hollis & Varga, 2021)(Hollis and Varga 42)
Three or more authors(Hollis et al., 2021)(Hollis et al. 42)
Narrative formHollis (2021) argued...Hollis argues... (42).

Keep this table nearby while you edit. Most of the errors below are a cell from one column used in the other.

1. The citation doesn't match the reference list

You cite (Tamberlane, 2020) in the text, but the reference list has "Tamberlain, R. (2019)." Or the source is missing from the list entirely.

Fix: The name in your in-text citation should match the first word of the corresponding reference entry, and in APA the year should match too. Do a final pass where you check every citation against the list, and the list against the text, since entries for sources you dropped should be deleted.

2. Missing page number on a direct quotation

"Most urban gardens fail in their second year, not their first" (Okafor, 2022).

Fix: Quotations need a locator.

  • APA: (Okafor, 2022, p. 118)
  • MLA: (Okafor 118)

If the source has no page numbers, use what it does have: a paragraph number (para. 6 in APA, par. 6 in MLA), a section heading, or a timestamp for audio and video.

3. Commas in MLA citations

Writers who learned APA first often write (Okafor, 118) in MLA.

Fix: MLA uses no comma between the author and the page: (Okafor 118). A comma appears only between two different elements, such as an author and a shortened title when you cite two works by the same person: (Okafor, Second Seasons 118).

4. Using "p." in MLA or leaving it out in APA

Fix: APA uses "p." for one page and "pp." for a range: (Okafor, 2022, pp. 118–119). MLA uses the number alone: (Okafor 118–19). Note that MLA allows the shortened second number in a range, while APA writes both in full.

5. Ampersand vs. "and"

In APA, two authors are joined with "&" inside parentheses but with "and" in running text.

  • Correct: (Lindqvist & Moreau, 2023)
  • Correct: Lindqvist and Moreau (2023) found...
  • Incorrect: Lindqvist & Moreau (2023) found...

MLA uses "and" in both places.

6. Listing every author when you should use et al.

APA 7th edition simplified this: for three or more authors, cite the first author plus "et al." from the first citation onward. MLA does the same for three or more authors.

Fix: (Ferreira et al., 2020) in APA, (Ferreira et al. 77) in MLA. Remember that "et al." has a period after "al" only, and no period after "et."

7. Including first names or initials

(Daniel Ferreira, 2020)

Fix: Use surnames only. The one exception, in both APA and MLA, is when two different first authors share a surname; then you add initials to tell them apart: (A. Ferreira, 2020) and (L. Ferreira, 2018) in APA, (A. Ferreira 77) in MLA.

8. Putting the period in the wrong place

For a quotation that sits inside your sentence, the citation comes before the final period:

"Second seasons decide everything" (Okafor, 2022, p. 120).

For a block quotation (40 or more words in APA, more than four lines of prose in MLA), the order flips: the quotation ends with its period, and the citation follows with no period after it.

9. Citing the year in MLA or skipping it in APA

APA is an author-date system, so the year is required every time, including narrative citations: Okafor (2022) noted... MLA is author-page, so the year normally does not appear in the citation at all.

Fix: Pick the right system for the paper and stay in it. Mixed citations are the most visible sign of a paper assembled from different drafts.

10. Handling sources with no author or no date badly

Writing "(Anonymous)" or "(n.a.)" is a frequent mistake. (Use "Anonymous" only when the work is actually signed that way.)

Fix: If there is no author, move the title into the author position. In APA, use a shortened title and the year: ("Rising Rents," 2024). In MLA, use a shortened title: ("Rising Rents"). If there is no date in APA, write n.d.: (Harbor Data Lab, n.d.). For a full walkthrough, see our guide on citing sources with no author.

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11. Citing the original when you only read the secondary source

Say you read a book by Varga that quotes an interview with Delacroix, but you never saw the interview yourself. Citing Delacroix directly implies you did.

Fix:

  • APA: (Delacroix, as cited in Varga, 2019). Only Varga goes in the reference list.
  • MLA: (qtd. in Varga 64). Only Varga goes in the works-cited list.

Use this sparingly. If the original is available, find it and cite it directly. Our guide on how to quote a quote covers the details.

12. Over-citing the same source in one paragraph

Repeating (Okafor, 2022) after every sentence makes a paragraph hard to read.

Fix: In APA, once you have cited a source narratively in a paragraph, you can omit the year in later narrative mentions in the same paragraph, as long as it stays clear which source you mean (parenthetical citations keep the year). In MLA, cite again when you add new page references or when another source has come in between. If one paragraph leans heavily on one source, consider whether you're summarizing too much and analyzing too little.

A five-minute checklist before you submit

Run through this list with your reference page open next to your draft:

  1. Every in-text citation has a matching reference entry, spelled the same way.
  2. Every reference entry is cited at least once in the text.
  3. Every direct quotation has a page number or other locator.
  4. APA citations include the year; MLA citations don't.
  5. No commas between author and page in MLA.
  6. "&" only inside APA parentheses; "and" everywhere else.
  7. Three or more authors use "et al."
  8. Periods sit after the parenthesis (except for block quotes).

A citation generator can format the reference entries, but it can't check that your text matches them. That last step is on you, and it's the one that catches the most problems.

Key takeaways

  • Most citation errors come from mixing APA and MLA conventions. Decide which style you're using and check each citation against it.
  • Quotations always need a locator: page, paragraph, section or timestamp.
  • The name you cite in the text should be the first word of a reference-list entry.
  • When a rule seems unclear for an unusual source, check your instructor's preferences or the current edition of the style guide rather than guessing.

Frequently asked questions

Do I need a page number for every in-text citation?

Not always. Both APA and MLA expect a page number (or other locator) for direct quotations. For paraphrases, MLA still asks for a page when one exists, while APA encourages but does not require it. If your source has no page numbers, use a paragraph number, section name or timestamp instead.

Is it wrong to put a comma between the author and page number in MLA?

Yes. MLA in-text citations have no comma between the author's name and the page number: (Hollis 42). APA does use commas: (Hollis, 2021, p. 42).

What if my in-text citation doesn't match anything in my reference list?

That is one of the most serious citation errors, because readers cannot find the source. Every in-text citation needs a matching entry, and the name you cite in the text should be the first word of that entry.

When do I use et al. in APA 7?

In APA 7th edition, use the first author's surname plus et al. for any source with three or more authors, starting with the first citation. Two-author sources always list both names.

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